Evaluation
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Unsatisfactory (0) |
Basic (Check Minus) |
Proficient (Check) |
Exemplary (Check Plus) |
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Point of View |
Diary is not in first person point of view. Diary entry does not include character's feelings |
Diary is mostly in first person point of view. Diary includes at least one emotion . |
Diary consistently uses first person point of view. Use of emotion. provides insight into character |
Diary blends first person point of view and historical details to portray a three dimensional character.
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Detail |
Diary entry is brief and superficial | Diary entry includes at least three details about the character's life | Diary entry includes more than three historically accurate details about the character's life | Diary entry uses historical details t convey a well written story | |
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Writing Mechanics and Structure
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Sentences are choppy, incomplete and awkward. Many mechanical errors. |
Sentences are efficient and sometimes awkward. Some paragraph problems exist. . |
Sentences are varied and mostly correct. Few mechanical errors. |
Sentences are well structured with variety. No mechanical errors. |
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Vocabulary
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Vague and redundant. Words used incorrectly. | Functional, but lacks inspiration |
Attempts figurative language, good grasp of vocabulary |
Accurate words convey intended meaning. Expressions are fresh and colorful. |